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Your perfect moment was spoiled in an instant when you heard an obnoxious shout and a pervy laugh from the bar.

Spain groaned. "I didn't even see them...?"

"Who?" You whispered from your awkward position on the dance floor. He pulled you up from where he was dipping you and glared at the two men at the bar.

You looked too. One of them was albino and had a very masculine look to him, the complete opposite of the other one. The other had long-ish blonde hair, beautiful blue eyes and a stubble for a beard.

"My best friends..." Spain sighed.

"Oh." You smiled a bit. "Then why are you mad?"

"I'm not..." He frowned as they walked over. "You guys, come on."

"But, like, we've been waiting FOREVER for you to get a girlfriend! It's just awesome! Well, not as awesome as me." The albino man smirked, crossing his arms.

"Oui, and she is quite beautiful." The man with a French accent winked at you, causing your cheeks to flush pink.

"She's not my-" Spain paused for a second and looked at you, obviously very embarrassed.

You looked at your feet, but you couldn't help but smile the tiniest bit.

"PSH that's bull. Of course she is!" The albino laughed loudly.

"______, these are my friends Prussia and France." Spain explained quietly.

"Nice to meet you." You smiled shyly, but stepped a little closer to Spain.

France laughed his Frenchy laugh. "Nice to meet you too, mademoiselle~"

Prussia was about to say something when Spain impatiently tugged on your hand.

"It's time for us to leave, I'll meet up with you guys later, si?" He said hurriedly before taking you out of the club.

"Sure!" They both called before they went back to their mindless chatting.


Once you guys got back to the house, you were very glad to finally have some alone time with your 'boyfriend' Tony. In fact, both of you were, since you kissed on the couch for quite a long time almost immediately.

You broke and smiled from where you were laying on him, running a hand through his hair.

He grinned back up at you, blushing, but happy.

"Tony...?" You whispered.


"You've never had a girlfriend?" That was on your mind since his friends brought it up. He was so handsome, and so sweet, surely he had fallen in love before.

". . . Well..." Spain laughed a bit nervously. "No serious ones, at least."

"Wow." Was all you could say.

Suddenly feeling very sleepy, you rested your head on his chest and closed your eyes.

He wrapped his arms around you and the feeling of security that his gesture gave you was very comforting.

"You know... My life has been pretty rough in the last few years... But, I think you've been the only exception to that." You murmured drowsily.

"I'm very glad to hear that, ______... Te amo."

You were fully awake in an instant upon hearing that.

"T-te amo demasiado!" You breathed back after a few moments of thought. But, you meant it. You truly did love the Spaniard that 'rescued' you from the streets. Looking up at him, you noticed he was already asleep, but he had a warm smile still on his lips.

You sighed happily and kissed his cheek before dosing off as well, happy to be safe and warm in Tony's arms.



You and Spain were soon in a serious relationship from that point, and you were pretty sure you could stay at his house for as long as you wanted.

After a few amazing years with your boyfriend, he proposed to you while you guys were watching the sunset on a cliff in beautiful Ciutadella. You said yes, of course, and married in a beautiful garden in Madrid.

A few years after your wedding, you gave birth to your first child, a son. You named him Tony Jr., of course!

Two years later you gave birth to a beautiful daughter, who you named Rosalita upon the request of your husband.

You and Spain then enjoyed your lives, raising your kids and exploring the world.

He truly was the only exception to your complicated life. ♥
I hope you enjoy it, here's the final part! ^_^ This was super fun to write! If you have any ideas for another Country x Reader, please let me know!

Part 1 - [link]
Part 2 - [link]
Part 3 - [link]
Part 4 - [link]
Part 5 - [link]
Final - You Are Here


I do not own the image above, I simply used it to go with the story. All of it belongs to its owner.

I do not own Hetalia or it's characters.

Story belongs to me.


"Te amo." - I love you.

"Te amo demasiado!" - I love you too.
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xXTomoDachiXx Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ve~ soo sweet :iconchibinitalyplz:

Great job!!
Falifer Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! ^w^
Starysky205 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student Writer
Actually "Te amo demasiado" would be literally translated to "I love you so much", if you want to say "I love you too" you should put "Yo tambien te amo". I should know being that I'm from a place where Spanish is the first language
Other than that your story was great!!
Falifer Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, I'm sorry, I've been corrected by several people all with their different versions so I'll keep it the same for now, but thank you! There are so many dialects that there's no literal translation, in my mind. :3
Starysky205 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student Writer
oh well that's a way to say it too, guess it kindda sounded weird for me
AnnaBella125 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
This was so amazing!! I don't have words to describe such awesomeness.... :#1:

Prussia: It wasn't as AWESOME as ZHE AWESOME ME, though? Kesesese~

Me: Shut up Prussia, it was more awesome than you. -.-

Prussia: W-What?!! :omfg:

Me: Sorry, I guess I broke him a bit.. hehehe... :poke:
Falifer Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! ^-^"
AnnaBella125 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
Me: You're welcome! Prussia...

Prussia: Ja, ja... it was awesome. -_-

Me: ^.^
Flyingmintbunny32 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Actually it's not te amo demasiado it's te amo más o te amo también. It mean I love you more or like how you have it I love you too. The también can be in front or at the end. I loved the story though! It's was way awesomer than Prussia! :iconspainplz:
Falifer Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh okay, thank you. ^^
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